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This is one of the darker chapters of this Book, and introduces us to two of the villains within this story. There are others, but these get their own chapter. Also, for everyone who wondered what sort of trap Filigree was flying into... well, you just found out.
I forgot to put it into the last batch, but critiques and comments and the like are always welcomed and encouraged!
- Polecat
G-doc Link: [link]
This is one of the darker chapters of this Book, and introduces us to two of the villains within this story. There are others, but these get their own chapter. Also, for everyone who wondered what sort of trap Filigree was flying into... well, you just found out.
I forgot to put it into the last batch, but critiques and comments and the like are always welcomed and encouraged!
- Polecat
G-doc Link: [link]
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>“It’s not our job to know why, Lieutenant.”
-‘’It’s not our job to know why, just to die.’’ ...not sure why, but the sentence, coming from ‘random Soldier X’, made me think of this ?
>you’re part of the greatest weapon in the world, the ‘Elements of Harmony’. I will not allow my enemies to possess a weapon of that caliber.”
-Apparently he didn’t got the memo that the Elements of Harmony were a *defensive* weapon, if we can call it a ‘weapon’.
>The Ponies have always been our enemies; some are just too foolish to see it.”
-Ah, I see. The classic ‘ ‘’ass/bad’’ prince that manage to access the throne in a bloodshed, and has overly-militaristic ambitions ’ ?
>“Torturer…” the golden furred king said, “begin with the little one.
-Mmh, ok... Let’s me see the ‘grimdark’ tag... wait ? There is none ? How straaaange... -_-
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>His side twinged at the memory of the burning wave of rainbow energy that had almost ended his existence for a second time.
> “I suppose I will need a new name,” >“Nightmare Moon somehow doesn’t seem appropriate.”
-Heeeeee... wait, what now ? I’m in *total* confusion, right now ?
Is the ‘Entity’ that was ‘Nightmare Moon’, and then just ‘Nightmare’ was a ‘’male’’ ? Is it the same ‘Entity’ ? Is it Tirak ? ‘’almost’’ and ‘’a second time’’ ?
This section certainly couldn’t have been introduced in a more confusing manner ?
>“I don’t seem to recall you objecting before,” the stallion taunted the reflection
-Ahhh... huh... hummm... Something-something what apparently(?) was left of ‘evil Entity’ and ‘forgot-his-name-Super Pony’ ? Something evil possession... being tricked ? ...previous story, maybe ?
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>“Oh yes. You thought that would give you some power over me.
>To hunt up this relic… and Equestria yielded its treasure to you
>Now it’s in ME, and unlike a foal like you, I know how to use it. I know how to corrupt it.”
-Soooo... it wasn’t Tirak/resurrected Tirak/ancestor that took the Orb of Sacrifice ? It was just Ultra-Dumb Pony ?
But, wait ? The ‘Entity’ just said ‘Ultra-dumb’ took the Orb hopping it would help him control the ‘Entity’ ? ...that mean he already knew the ‘Entity’ hadn’t been destroyed AND knew where ‘It’ was located ?
How ? (I mean, not even the Princesses knew.)
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It was... huh... interesting. But, also surprisingly confusing near the end ?
-‘’It’s not our job to know why, just to die.’’ ...not sure why, but the sentence, coming from ‘random Soldier X’, made me think of this ?
>you’re part of the greatest weapon in the world, the ‘Elements of Harmony’. I will not allow my enemies to possess a weapon of that caliber.”
-Apparently he didn’t got the memo that the Elements of Harmony were a *defensive* weapon, if we can call it a ‘weapon’.
>The Ponies have always been our enemies; some are just too foolish to see it.”
-Ah, I see. The classic ‘ ‘’ass/bad’’ prince that manage to access the throne in a bloodshed, and has overly-militaristic ambitions ’ ?
>“Torturer…” the golden furred king said, “begin with the little one.
-Mmh, ok... Let’s me see the ‘grimdark’ tag... wait ? There is none ? How straaaange... -_-
---
>His side twinged at the memory of the burning wave of rainbow energy that had almost ended his existence for a second time.
> “I suppose I will need a new name,” >“Nightmare Moon somehow doesn’t seem appropriate.”
-Heeeeee... wait, what now ? I’m in *total* confusion, right now ?
Is the ‘Entity’ that was ‘Nightmare Moon’, and then just ‘Nightmare’ was a ‘’male’’ ? Is it the same ‘Entity’ ? Is it Tirak ? ‘’almost’’ and ‘’a second time’’ ?
This section certainly couldn’t have been introduced in a more confusing manner ?
>“I don’t seem to recall you objecting before,” the stallion taunted the reflection
-Ahhh... huh... hummm... Something-something what apparently(?) was left of ‘evil Entity’ and ‘forgot-his-name-Super Pony’ ? Something evil possession... being tricked ? ...previous story, maybe ?
---
>“Oh yes. You thought that would give you some power over me.
>To hunt up this relic… and Equestria yielded its treasure to you
>Now it’s in ME, and unlike a foal like you, I know how to use it. I know how to corrupt it.”
-Soooo... it wasn’t Tirak/resurrected Tirak/ancestor that took the Orb of Sacrifice ? It was just Ultra-Dumb Pony ?
But, wait ? The ‘Entity’ just said ‘Ultra-dumb’ took the Orb hopping it would help him control the ‘Entity’ ? ...that mean he already knew the ‘Entity’ hadn’t been destroyed AND knew where ‘It’ was located ?
How ? (I mean, not even the Princesses knew.)
-----
It was... huh... interesting. But, also surprisingly confusing near the end ?